ouch,
REALLY freaking off-time and out of tune. u switched key way too many times too.
ur rythm section blew chunks. one being u CANT HEAR IT, and two being u didnt even play along with it.
not gna lie with this one, back to the drawing boards please. youve got good guitar skill, just jam with yourself and mebbe a metronome....or two. >.<
WOW.
HOW did you record ur instruments? if they're not live, i kill you....even if they aren't....HOLY CRAP. i like. i wouldve appreciated more work in the drum section, but i can deal with that. NICE JOB.
Heh. :D Thanks for the review, si this thing weeklied?
interesting...
your song lacks too much melodic varity for me. the beeping thing and the pad in the background is all you have. i wouldve prbly used some kind of swishy space fx for added effect, too.
for the drums, 3/5. i love beat chopping myself and you did a satisfactory job of it in this tune. i wouldve used a different kit tho. imo, most acoustic kits are hard to slice n dice and sound good.
why 8? cuz i like the eerie/abstract/mars-ish mood you established with your pads and blippity blops....i didnt like the drums as much. keep it up. 4'd.
You were sitting in traffic? and you wrote a song? or you got ideas?
radio edit, eh?
yeahs, very professional sound-quality. i like i like. maybe you could do a bit of panning with the instruments? get rid of the stacked sound. nothing major tho. the rest of the song totally makes up for that....this actually gna be on the radio?
Haha, I wish it were going to be on the radio. I labeled it as such because this is only four minutes while the extended version is over eight minutes. If anybody happens to come upon it and wants to put it on the radio, they would be able to do so with no difficulties whatsoever.
If I wanted, I could probably hand this to the station located at my old high school. They play electronica almost every night.
In any case, thank you for the review. I will highly consider what you have brought to my attention.
holy crap!
REAL nice melodies and such; melodic value-wise, this tune kicks @$$.
BUT THE LOOPS MAN. arrrgh.
lol. binge drinking.
to he who wrote that: listen at 2 minutes flat. lol.
chromatronic is INS4N3. 5'd.
makes my stomach move.
lol. WTF MAN. i like. ITS CRAZY. its like music with tourettes. hahahahhahaaha 5'd.
evil-dog?
holy crap! havent seen that name since punk-o-matic! 10/10 just cause ur all over the net and would prbly send evil-doers after me if i voted low.
guess ill go check out this lil flash now...
haha you haven't been looking at the right place, I'm active in the audio portal hehe :)
peace man
ps: I called back my assassins
haha.
yeah, ambient is an acquired taste, i find. only thing i dint like was the almost-off-tune synth loop in the bg. gj gj.
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