weird.
"be gentle with your vote" hahahhahaa *GAY* aaaahahahhaha.
aside from that; sounds to me like mashed ur melodies a bit too much, meaning that a) they didnt flow well b) were out of sync sometimes and c) ot of key sometimes.
and why is it a video game song? >:(
maybe im just in a shit mood, but this could use a tad bit o work.